Not every thing works - sometimes I can be so heavy handed. The idea for this was good but I over egged it by having too much going on at once. I usually say carry on to the end of a piece before you make a judgement but this is irredeemable, so short of applying gesso over the whole thing I think I'll cut it up to make elements for some other work.
My evening stitching has been crochet in cotton perle, little two inch squares of sugared almond colours I think they will become separate elements to again use in larger pieces. I like to top up my stash of made up elements because they feature in a lot of my work.